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Skies of Arcadia

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Welcome to the world of ADD in HD.
Give me your hand and follow me
To where the wild things come to play
And freedom is always free.
It’s all a dream sleeping beauty;
Keep your eyes wide shut and see.
Come embrace your insanity
And come dance with the child in me.
Welcome to the skies of Arcadia
Where dreams become reality.
Where zero and zero make infinite
And freedom’s the only salary.
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I really like this piece. A lot actually.
But if you're interested in some critique: I really really like the rhyming theme, especially with how creative it is. However, the fact that lines 3 and 9 don't fit into the same rhyming pattern makes them stick out quite a bit.